June 26, 2017 - me
Sven and Dazzle 2.1: community feedback update
Edit: You gotta love having so many different people post here
Axe has no axe! Axe cuts no more...
I like this version, it's more concise and clear. I did like how Axe and Dazzle was shaded before though. I personally think the line coloring is a bit busy and noisy.
I liked both, but it is much better if you see Sven in pain and also Axe has no Axe.
I liked the patchnotes
thatgasp made this a lot better lol
i didnt got the joke last time,this is way better
poor sven :(
way better. keep it up! entertain us!
Nah. Much better the first time. Dazzle seems much more humourously evil in the first one because he drops his one liner whilst Sven is dying, rather than before. Plus preferred the irony that axe can't use his own axe to cut down the tree.
Don't crowd source your comics, you crushed it the first time! :)
In part 3, the tree expires just before Shallow Grave ends, Sven survives but Zeus from the enemy team ults and Sven gets reported for feeding.
This one has no subtlety, I like the first one more. It was just a little hard to understand that Sven had hanged himself. I feel like if you just replaced the first panel in the original with this one's, all would be good. The underlined "enjoy" kind of takes away the quiet, cute-evil quality that Dazzle had in the original
U KEPT THE FINGER GUNS THANKS BIG FAN OF THE FINGERS
I liked the old one a lot. But this one is way better actually, good job!
The second and last panel would be way funnier without the text bubbles.
Axe u already here, stoopid
The fact you added stress lines showing hes moving on the rope is top tier! Liked all of them so far, keep on keeping on my dude!
First one was better.
Trust ur instincts, instead of these shit posters here
Why axe is missing his "pony tail"?
Gotta love those finger guns, though. I'm glad you kept them.
I thought you were going to take the same comic from last week, and just take out the chatbox from the last panel and give it a weird smirk on dazzle's face
the thing is, why axe has no axe?
Wanted to see how much the result would be way funnier without the text bubbles.
This one is sooooooo much better than the last one.
I liked the other one better. Also please, don't rewrite your stuff based on community preferences. It will eventually make your work lose personality
If dazzle just said ''No, wait'' it would have been better
I liked the previous version better, but this is still awesome.
Well that was morbid.
Much obliged. I could not understand what the previous version was about
Thank you for making the joke very explicit. My crippling autism and superiority complex prevents me from engaging in "humor," therefore your last comic was lost on me but this one, where you explicitly state the joke, is much better. I think most redditors will agree with me that any sort of subtlety detracts from the joke as it impedes people with severe autism from fully appreciating the joke.
Keep 'em coming please!
FINALLY ITS HERE HAVE MY UPVOTE YOU LOVABLE PERSON
This shitpost goes further than we've ever gone before, with the added patch notes. Your parents must be proud of the man you've become
This one is actually funny. First one wasn't.
Much better, good feedback you have, when it comes to short snappy 2 or 3 frame comics, never say with words what you can say with a picture, cuts out redundancy.
if you want more critique I feel Dazzle should have a better line in second frame, you've essentially already gave half of the joke away that Dazzle wants to prolongs Sven suffering before the third frame, so I think it should be something along the lines of "No time to get an axe he'll probably be dead by then, here, I've an idea" or something along those lines preferably shorter that fits better.
In the older comic I thought Sven had become a GIANT.
I got the joke this time!
I am definitely way too old to even BEGIN trying to understand why something like this would ever be upvoted or need some sort of "Feedback" update. But I digress and will step aside and let the waves of mediocrity and unoriginality slowly swallow my old codger soul. I hope you find the attention and validation you are seeking little boy or girl.